I read a great book this weekend that would have been much better with a
little help from an editor. As I started to read the novel, I was
thinking “This person is so good. Why is s/he not traditionally
published? Why isn’t there a movie deal on the table?” Sure, there were a
few typos, maybe ten in the entire book. An editor would have caught
those, but okay, the story is so good, I just read on. And then I
reached the end. Reader, it wasn’t good. It didn’t give that sense of
completion a great ending always strives to achieve. It was like this
person just stopped typing. And I felt really bad for that author,
because an editor would have helped improve the weak conclusion. My
editor at The Wild Rose Press spotted the sloppy ending of Blue Heaven,
my soon to be released novel, right away. It was the first comment she
offered me. And when she said it, I knew she was right. I scrapped 50 or
so pages and got back to work. As much as I love the indie community,
everyone in it should have an editor. I have two degrees in English
literature, taught writing to college students for almost two decades
and worked as a staff reviewer in two top trade magazines. I’ve read
widely and have given editing advice to thousands of college freshmen.
And I still need my editor to get my novel right. About those college
freshman…by far the most common problem I see in their essays is not
grammar or usage issues, it’s the conclusion. College students can’t
wait for the assignment to be over, so many of them dash off a weak
conclusion. Novelists can’t afford to do that. Our endings should wrap
up the story, but more, they should offer one last special something for
the reader. Brilliant endings are just as important as fabulous
openings. Conclusions can make or break a book. If the ending doesn’t
work, that’s likely all a reader will remember. If an ending is special
in some way, readers will remember that, too. And they’ll buy your next
book. by cindy in Blue Heaven, Cindy's Indies, Editors, self-publishing,
The Wild Rose Press Tags: editing, proofreading, reading, writing
By Cynthia Harrison
http://www.cynthiah
arrison.com
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arrison.com/
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