Writing for a Series: Don’t Tell Me What To Do. I’m a God in My Own Mind.
I’ll let you in on a little secret. All writers have a dark side. Deep
down we’re convinced if people would only do everything we say, damn it,
the world would be a better place. Eventually each one of us comes to
the sorry conclusion we won’t be elected Ruler of the World. The only
way to make up for the crushing disappointment is to write. On paper I
wield omnipotent power over my fictional realm. I manipulate lives, kill
off all my enemies (in print), and create people way more interesting
than myself. Not to mention, being adored by millions of fans (in my
mind.) The dark forces rise. Mwah-ha-ha.
Then I got the chance to write One Enchanted Evening for a series.
for a pre-existing series has a special set of challenges. Writers do
not necessarily play well with others. We are pasty-faced individuals,
bereft of social skills. Banished to unheated garrets with quills in
hand, we battle wasting upper respiratory ailments. Writing for a series
requires unprecedented cooperation and no small amount of patience.
Coughing delicately into our lacy handkerchiefs, we must scurry from the
garret to interact with real people. It’s hard.
Build from the fictional ground up.
first step in the development of the Lobster Cove series for Wild Rose
Press was to appoint a coordinating editor. Rumor has it she didn’t duck
fast enough and got slapped with the job. Lord knows, it’s not for the
faint of heart. Her responsibility entailed devising the original
platform; in this case a small town on the coast of Maine. Stories would
cover all time periods; past, present, and future. Full length novels,
novelettes, and even short stories were welcome along with an array of
fiction genres such as contemporary, historical, suspense, paranormal
and, yes, even naughty bits of erotica. Like a real town, Lobster Cove
would have diversity in spades.
To rough out descriptive details,
the editor solicited suggestions early from those who had an interest
in writing for the series. Decisions had to be made concerning the size
of the town in both area and population. What were the most logical
major and minor industries in a Maine coastal resort area? What were
typical occupations? The editor created a master spreadsheet with
categories and descriptions of places and occupations, male and female
characters, town events, and other reference items writers might need.
With the basics laid out, next came an actual town map highlighting
streets and locations of buildings and service organizations such as the
police department, hospital, and public schools. Local landmarks were
chosen and situated. Lobster Cove now had a lighthouse, a centrally
located park with gazebo, manmade lake, beaches, and an offshore island.
Submissions opened up. Publishing contracts were signed. New
businesses and characters were added to the spreadsheet. The map filled
in even more. Slowly, Lobster Cove began to resemble a real town.
Places, however, need more than people and buildings. Dozens of other
details had to be worked out such as festivals, town events, flora and
fauna, and the high school mascot. World-building is a pain. No wonder
gods are so cranky.
What do you mean there’s no room for Ye Olde Donut Shoppe? Not even a lousy kiosk?
creating a world from scratch, the author controls the population. Not
so in a series. As far as story ideas, it’s first come, first served and
all subject to the coordinating editor’s approval. The first person to
use a character defines a character. If a contracted story states the
mayor is a cross-dressing, Irish-Argentinian cat fancier with irritable
bowel syndrome than that’s what goes into the spreadsheet. Anyone else
wanting to use the mayor has to take Pedro O’Toole and his kittens,
gastroenteritis, and feathered boa as is. Either that or its back to the
Lack of control can be a royal pain especially when
it comes to the major setting for your story. Food venues seem to be the
first to go. It makes sense. Coffee shops, restaurants, or bakeries are
all perfect places for social interaction—great venues for story arcs.
You may have written a moving, charming, brilliant, and gripping tale
about the owner of a donut shop, but if another writer beats you to the
punch, and the editor decrees Lobster Cove has enough donut shops,
you’re out of luck. Back to the rewrites.
There are additional
considerations when coordinating details with other writers. Want your
characters to have a romantic walk along the pier on the third Saturday
in June? Oops, too bad. Another author has a storm scheduled that day.
Have a big denouement in the police chief’s office the last week of
September? Pity, another author is having it fumigated. One sticky
problem I had was the name of a particular character. He was a minor,
but necessary addition to my story. I couldn’t write around him, but he
was not my character. His role had already been defined by another. That
meant his name had been selected and it happened to be a name I detest.
This is not the name for someone who is an asset to a community. This
is the name of a kid who sat next to me in kindergarten, grabbing his
crotch and making airplane noises. Seriously, I wouldn’t give a gerbil
in one of my stories this name, but I was stuck with it. I gnashed my
teeth each time I typed it in.
Another problem is time limits.
Writing for a series is not for someone who needs two years to crank out
a story. Submission dates are firm. If you can’t finish by the
deadline, than you need to shop your work around somewhere else.
Give it up for the team.
had reservations about working on a series. Writing for me has always
been a solitary art and I wasn’t sure I could be a team player. I was
wrong. Despite minor irritations, working on One Enchanted Evening was a
blast. It’s good to step out of your comfort zone. It stretches those
The foremost pleasure comes from the
collaboration with other writers dedicated to infusing life into a
fictional town. Lobster Covians (yeah, we had a discussion about what to
call inhabitants, too) are an eager talented group ready to share ideas
and research. An innocent query into the writer’s loop about a
character or place brings a plethora of links, pictures, and helpful
hints. Need someone to read a passage from a work in progress to see if
it rings true? Just post a query. Someone will answer and give you the
benefit of their experience. It’s a warm, supportive community with an
enthusiastic cheering squad. I’m proud to be an honorary citizen of the
L. A. Kelley writes fantasies with adventure, romance, humor and touch
of sass. Her newest release, One Enchanted Evening, comes out on
September 29. You can find her at http://lakelleythenaughtylist.blogspot.com
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